The Reviewing Team wrote:
Helen, a good try here, but like we've said to a few others too, you need to work on your voice and tone. It varies at times, which detracts from the sincerity of the piece and also some of facial expressions are a bit too exaggerated. Now having seen a few things you've done, it looks to us, that we can see the intentions of your performance, but they are not quite reconciled with how you execute them. This is another way of saying, the right thought processes are going on in the inside, but they are not manifesting fully on the outside, i.e. the performance. You need to practice more and more, record everything you do and watch it again and again. You show good promise.
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